As I struggle to finish the first draft of my manuscript, I find this strangely inspiring and comforting:
It’s the first page of Vladimir Nabokov’s first draft of Invitation to a Beheading, or, in its Russian incarnation (pictured here), Приглашение на Казнь. As I look at it, I’m reminded of Mark Twain’s words, “The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter—’tis the difference between the lightning-bug and the lightning.” It’s easy to forget that hardly ever do we get to the lightning without a struggle.
Many thanks to Jonathan Gottschall for providing the image–and more inspiring first drafts on his blog, here.
And now, onwards with the writing.
A thank you to sure-eyed reader JSM for tracking down and providing the accurate version of the Mark Twain quote.
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I’d like to see the same page on Nabokov’s personal copy of the printed version. Maybe it’s just as messy with corrections. Once you start revising…
Yes, that would be something to see, for sure.
Nice blog. Well-written, persipacious. I just read and enjoyed your essay at The Atlantic, so . . .
Regarding the Mark Twain quote: The correct quote is:
The difference between the almost right word & the right word is really a large matter–it’s the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.
Thank you! I will now track down the original to make sure I have the proper sourcing. Unless you know off the top of your head where it’s from?
Please see the source below. It appears to be authentic, but I have not looked up the letter.
The difference between the almost right word & the right word is really a large matter–it’s the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.
- Letter to George Bainton, 10/15/1888
Thanks! I appreciate it. I’ll look into it and see what I find.
Sorry about being a pest. But I don’t want to perpetuate an error. The folllowing is the exact quote (note there is no ampersand and the “tis “) and I have verified it. Google has the book online.
The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter—’tis the difference between the lightning-bug and the lightning.
George Bainton, The Art of Authorship, pp. 87–88 (1890).
Excellent. Thank you so much. Not a pest at all–I really appreciate it. The last thing I want to do is have an incorrect quotation. I’ll change it now.